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vertigo verbage
the clean halls throw shadow voices
echoes to the deep where the
sub service works
lip works to the inane and
subtle hazings
the songs the backdrop soothing
and foreboding
of the great seasonal cast
ahead....
running the new grounds
where the greater ideals
swim
a thrill and danger
about
from the cabin
..
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Comments
weirdelf
Mon, 2014-11-03 17:04
Sometimes the best critique
is to let you hear your poem in a different accent, style, pacing and emotion.
https://soundcloud.com/user536630132/add-new-comment-vertigo
cheers,
Jess
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Esker
Mon, 2014-11-03 23:10
Hey!!!!!!!!
Sometimes..You may be right!!
Poetry is to be read aloud..at least when the greats gathered they loved to do this!!
Like the ancient greeks did in their teatros...is that spelled write..right..
rite..
Thank You for the read!