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At Things Move On (-& On)...

-But we wonder about the world, out there...,
-Beyond our families and friends…
-The steps, or crises, seen elsewhere…,
-Some to applaud, some seeming without end...(!).

-We hope we can still achieve stuff…
-With less threat from disease, or war…
-But, as we’re older-living, increasingly…
-Will our successes prove our flaws…? (!).

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wondering, if maybe your native language might be Latin based, like Spanish? Your lines seem to have that quality about them, in the way they are structured. I think you have a typo in your title, and what is with the dashes beginning the lines and the ellipsis on the end? ~ Geezer.

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I like the message and meaning here, and share many of these thoughts. Should the title be "As" instead of "At" - maybe? I, too, wonder about the intent of the bullets and ellipses.
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