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.............................temperance inertia...............................

Submitted by Esker on Sun, 2015-10-18 11:30

like a flow
the break away
dust
rattles of its heights
the hygiene touch
the delicate brush
and I
hiss an ember
duty bound
the call of its
master
the love of
a home thrift
disaster

comforted in its
gentle swell
the voice like
pleasure
the dull like
dell
soft as a prayer
encircling wall
into the static
and anger
here
waiting quiet
heat waves
in the drifts
for your wind
to blow across
my soul
and ignite
the fire
chase back
this dark

...

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Esker

Sun, 2015-10-18 11:33

Esker's picture

a new conversation
a muse corporate
and corporeal
how we change each
other in the inter
between the selves
and self
the other

gentle she asks
shhh
she says
my words leaping
the stride putting
miles
did I ever touch
down

I listen to seether
she likes JB

what do you mean....

appropriate
finding meaning
and the search
for one

as two

esker the ponder.....:(

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emeka ozurumba

Tue, 2015-11-03 03:54

emeka ozurumba's picture

the land scape of description fits very invariably the theme and focus of attention you wove to the plot, very excellent condensation

Esker

Tue, 2015-11-03 09:59

Esker's picture

it does precipitate
from the cloud chamber
thoughts ideas

was reading your works the other day
must comment on them
our works are similar
!

thank U

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