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Tattered Books

I never ever buy a brand new book
not that I don't like its looks
it may cost me just a couple of nuts
yet tattered ones I value the most

to me they deceives their tattered looks
with bookmarks and those folded ends
even stains of tears dried over years
as morbid remains of some emotion

I came across one with a missing page
which made me scratch my head no end,
till I read that page in blank mind space
with the lens of Mr. Sherlock Holmes

It's fun to read some gifting notes
with names, signs and date lines
takes me back down memory lane
when I curled up with Enid Blyton

Some have holes left by pests
who had found it best to feast
I looked through them
with my book worm eyes
for coffins or
holocaust survivors

while I sift through the pages
tattered over ages
more stories I seem to walk
of all those folks
who walked through the gates
and let their minds throb

it's hard to tag my vintage tribe
worth more than I can ever count
their makers now walk as ghosts
my best of friends past midnight

we walk the talk and talk the walk
sharing all their tricks of trade
before all of them return to their dens
after laying down my Specs to rest-

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
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Comments

curious and so I read, straight through to the end. I'm not sure what to call this? Internal narrative? I was struck by the sudden deterioration of rhyme and near rhyme and wondered if it were accidental that you started in rhyme and didn't notice. I like your title; most generally, anything that has books in the title will get my attention. Anyhow, I was drawn in and stayed for the ride.~ Geezer.
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for taking the time to read. I agree that being not good in rhyme I couldn't maintain it through and through so stuck to the theme. I agree that the title which has book in it does not generally appeal to readers.

Thanks again
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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for your time,,,read and suggestion...If rhyme is not my forte it is something for me to work on ...to make it flow like a breeze...I will do it for sure ...

Thanks again...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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