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t o r r e n t i a l i t y

Submitted by Esker on Wed, 2012-05-30 00:25

ruse it clever baby

fuse it with your cleaver

the hard candy receiver

drenched in your fear and sweet sweat

wet slather and yes

I would rather

Pump it Pump it
Nitro scene
the fabric crawls
its taut obscene

the broken glass
like glitter death
expound the drones
and fuck the mess

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weirdelf

Fri, 2012-06-01 05:55

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This poem struck a strong chord with some stuff happening in my life at the moment.

Brother, we do share a deep connection across geography and culture.

Thanks for this, I feel less alone, perhaps that ability is one of the highest aspirations of poetry.

cheers,
Jess
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