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Sunday

On Sundays, let the dreamers take control
Coffee, books, and hooded sweaters, role
Naps to restore, snacks to nourish each soul
Messy buns and glasses, enter the day with a goal

Let imaginations run wild, and dreams unfold
To explore, discover, to be ten times bold
A happy, blissful peace unlike no other day
Conspired by the Lord above, with fortune and fate to play

Sacrifice sleep today, time last forever
Though Sunday hastens away, bear the bliss together
For this day I wish none ever find end
But in memories, remain close to our hearts and minds

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I love this one!! Great write!

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