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Submitted by Eislen on Thu, 2012-04-26 23:39

Occupancy and lesser
atrocity,

thrown eccentricities.

My wheel is thick,
and the mile is wicked,
(burberry light frownings,
unicorn drownings)
In umber steerage
I heel!
elixir parties rush,
and the club crush.

"into the rushing beast of the night
sucked up by that great dragon to split
with my life with no flag,
no belly,
no cry."

A Sexton Qoute from
ALL MY PRETTY ONES

Eislen 2011

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2012-04-29 15:41

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A very stirring piece! Especially this:

"into the rushing beast of the night
sucked up by that great dragon to split
with my life with no flag,
no belly,
no cry."

always, Cat

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Eislen

Fri, 2012-06-22 16:13

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My mother used to read us passages to encourage us to flex
our minds eye

I remember this piece vividly that I quoted that you liked in the
comment feild. It is Ann's beautiful mind!

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loved

Sat, 2012-06-23 02:08

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give her the credit for ur imagination

loved

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