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SPLENDOR edit
SPLENDOR
I write as though I were
in a trance mesmerized
by visions of my own creation
haunted by early childhood
recollections, and the disillusions
that a lifetime brings to each of us
yet we rise to the unique
in a sea of commonality :
this is our Splendor
and our eventual Fall
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Comments
Esker
Fri, 2016-01-22 14:15
excellent write!
so true Joe!
Geremia
Wed, 2016-02-10 13:55
Poetry is truth,,,,thanks,
Poetry is truth,,,,thanks, Steven
joe
lovedly
Fri, 2016-01-22 14:22
and what a lovely vision after all
Joe amongst all NEOPOETS
you alone stand tall
we may
like 9 pins fall
Geremia
Wed, 2016-02-10 13:58
..and you stand just as tall,
..and you stand just as tall, my friend.
joe