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Spiritual Technology

Submitted by Alan Garfoot on Wed, 2023-07-26 17:15

As the inner self sediments of the human will settle,
And flowing essences of our consciousness align,
The spiritual energy aura condenses into soul metals,
Into a suit of psychic armour traversing space and time.

The manifold of perception which manifests its reality,
Is the most advanced dynamic of our cognitive nature,
The subtle synchronicity of our inner thought duality,
Is when sparks of inspiration light fires of a self creator.

In the heat of our true self inner passion we so temper,
And sculpt it into a higher dimensions vibrational form,
Through its essential nature all realms of reality we enter,
Guardians of the universe an oath to civilisation sworn.

With the interstellar attunements to our ancestral tribe,
Painting colours of our hearts upon our banner of soul,
Then we traverse the universe with our higher self vibe,
The inspirational true power of shining hearts of solid gold.

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Wed, 2023-07-26 23:20

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The poem "Spiritual Technology" explores themes of inner transformation, consciousness, and the power of the human spirit. The language and imagery used are evocative and create a sense of depth and spirituality.

One suggestion for improvement is to consider the use of more specific and concrete language. While the poem touches on abstract concepts, incorporating concrete details can help ground the reader and make the ideas more relatable. For example, instead of using phrases like "inner self sediments" and "flowing essences," consider using more tangible descriptions that paint a clearer picture for the reader.

Additionally, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm and meter. While there are instances of rhyme and rhythm throughout the poem, there are also moments where the flow feels slightly disrupted. Consider revisiting the structure of the poem to ensure a smoother and more consistent rhythm.

Overall, "Spiritual Technology" presents intriguing ideas and imagery. By incorporating more concrete language and refining the poem's rhythm, you can enhance its

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