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SOLITARY MOMENT

the lone wolf
falls prey to uncertainty
the fury of time

©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu

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This is really something else.

It might be stronger like this

the lone wolf
falls prey to uncertainty
the fury of time

But really it’s spectacular as is.

Tim

For the eagle eye. That suits well.
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"Time will crush on us if we don't utilize it. Just remember, you're an element of time".

~Jackweb

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this is lovely. I want more!

*hugs, Cat

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"Time will crush on us if we don't utilize it. Just remember, you're an element of time".

~Jackweb

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Hi, Jackweb,
This is strong. I can feel the keen sense of anxiety. Perfect title.
Lav

Thanks a bunch esteemed poet.
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"Time will crush on us if we don't utilize it. Just remember, you're an element of time".

~Jackweb

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