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S A T C H E L ..P A C K E T
the glow sham
curtain dreams
are sliding
drawing a breadth
where livid light
will splice
ocular transmittance
these image jaunts
fall like random whispers
snug up the buckle
suck a breath
and swift away the false
premonitions
cacophonous limp
slender wrist twitch
thrown care
from the edge of that bony hip
but I baby
dont scare
how you love
black thick
a stare of night
calamities tryst
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2012-06-26 11:05
Hello steven,
The title had me lost and confused. But I loved these lines:
from the edge of that bony hip
but I baby
dont scare
how you love
black thick
a stare of night
calamities tryst
they pack a punch!
always, Cat
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