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Realignment
Re-centering
Rethinking
Relaxing
Releasing anger
Receptive
Respondent
Resilient
Resourceful
Respectful
Reserved
Requiting
Remarkable
Returning
Rejuvenated
Rehabilitation
Self-Realization
Recognizant
Recovery
Redefined
Redressed
Reclamation
Reconstructed
Repairing
Resplendent
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Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.
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Geezer
Tue, 2023-07-04 06:21
Only one thing...
and I'm not sure if it was purposeful or accidental. I see that you have one break from the R's, and I wondered if it might be to provide that break and accent the [self] or just that you couldn't figure out a way to say it so that it began with an R. If it is that you need a way to begin it with an R, then I would say, [Realization of self]. You seem much more energetic and sure of yourself, than in recent times. I hope that your adjustment of attitude is one strength and renewal. Good work!
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Rosewood Apothecary
Tue, 2023-07-04 07:57
It just sorta came out that way
I’m ok with the break in the pattern. I do like your suggestion that maybe it’s to accent that line which I never planned on. Now that you’ve mentioned it it’s so obvious and effective.
Good looks as always
Tim
author commentLavender
Tue, 2023-07-04 17:51
Realignment
Hello, Tim,
Love this! Really like the break with "Self-Realization." To me, it's the most important element.
Thank you!
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2023-07-05 06:39
dear Tim.
this seams like a good check-list for reaffirming the vows to one-self!
*hugs & love, Cat
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