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RABBITeARS

in the dark
winter has come with its relief
the cold foggy banks in morning
blowing the square forest
free
the rains washing the grit
the soot of dreams
that would grey up a
happiest cloud

and xmas lights are on the
confectionary
and wide windows full of
xmas wonder
like the snows from the Atlantic
landing on wool caps and felt
brims...empty heads for the
daring
those that want too look up

In the hallways with worn runners
and terrazio..etchings and numbers
the phone hanging on the wall
a living current lift the reciever
the ocean is carried in some nights
like the old sea ghosts
then
the phone
in my hand
put a finger in the heavy
cast chrome change reciever
that jingles when the
pushed button is thumbed
silver....
unlike now
warm
the worlds composite and harder
perhaps better
a brass key unlocks the deadbolts
steps known in the dark
like sleepwalking
turn the television on
the glow while the white dot
expands
the tubes
the heat..warm hands in morning
the black leads screwed in to the
vhf with crescent clips
and bakelite or plastic..chrome
telescopic later but then solid
extensions like feelers
feeling the analog waves
pulsing through

each night the routine
chunka chunka through the channels
the pale tiger eye glow
the snap of the volume and on
button...the crackle of setting the
volume
Tuning...
look outside the wind sways the
ornaments
the lights sparkle
the sky is torn throwing its drowned
lights back
the flourescent to the kitchen vivid
the roachs hide
the rounded fridge..the glass milk
bottle
the brown meat from the butcher
the cast iron frying pan
or later the radio...
for shortwave
fall asleep in the textile and hardwood
of the easy chair
quiet on the way up...garlic and basil
fish...pork chops...olive oil..dark roast
coffee and bacon...cigarettes
the stale smell of a building raising a
length of generations
like a warren
the ears pull it in
comforting the glow
flickering
the hassock
the world melds with the
world melding plots
on themes
and then the dreams
melding plots
of lives
and schemes
...

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radio was king till television took over...and even then they broadcast the games...grew up with hockey...i quit watching it in seventy five...reading books more after that...so I still remember all those names...Sitler..Hull..trechyak..Mahovalich..Henderson..Espisito...I write my stories blank so people can link into it...more like a setting...sparce really...but I like it...and that people connect into it in the way they do is awesome!! got a little coffee thingy from spain my old lady brought back....today I bought some little foil pack of coffee from Italy!! something fancy.....I watched a troupe of hockey players coming to the mall..was busy today or yesterday...like a pack of wolves....if these are our hometown players they have won all their games so far...we are a hockeytown!! Molson beer...and those TV dinners in foil..Swanson..the beef patty and the chocolate pudding cake...corn..now they make the hungryman varieties in cardboard for the nukers...and TV Tables those fold out trays with some kind of scene on them...some hostess chips or pretzels and dip!

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in Canada there will be
no snow this Christmas
Esker
cotton will have to do
what option have you

which is nice for everyone..biking...walking...but I miss the winters....we once had...cotton...that would do....

author comment

TY TC GB

So kind of you,
no snow this year
you know
still we all are Merry
all know

Just returned from the mall
No Father Christmas at call
kids smiling away too

moms and pops are happy
saving on photographs
too costly
as always this day
but turkey all will have
that's well and okay

to all POETS in the world
I wish
a Happy New Year too
2016

Loved this one, it needs to go into the Winter contest, but I suppose you also have plenty of Arrow heads there lol.
Take care young Wolf and I hope that your hunting of the Spirit world will leave you in awe and wonder.
Talk more in 16 have a great time out there,
Yours Ian, Anne and the Children..

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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

only mention of xmas and re reading your comment
and reading my work I see how I write
how I break this up
not even a pause really
half the time I dont put in punctuation because
im unsure where too put it
was terrible in high school
lazy also I might add

the whole poem comes from a trailer from a
game.."the last of us" but it so reminded me
of when I was younger..lived at my dads
adequate and nice home and then my
moms...her new bf and hers

i would basically watch both places
because then I had no girlfriends
both were a closed family system
although friendly enough

the television just filled in the empty
walls..but I was also listening to radio
then...or records...and a window open
where we lived was in the weather path
off the one great lake....wind in the
cedars growing right outside and
a long couch where I would park
my long frame...so I had all this input
coming in and I was reading books
then I could read two three books
at a time through the month
hit the library and keep going
also was a terrible addicted person
too....but would snap it together
and keep things shipshape
and was writing poetry...
mostly about idealogy of a relationship
then actually in a working relationship
I still think I live in the ideal more then
the actual give and take
but that seems to be this crazy creative
thing that is common with many artists
not a complete totality...but enough
tortured demanding pouting
depressed wild imbibing people
would write the most compelling lyrics
or lines about what they were going
through or feeling

this xmas is going well
in that gifts purchased
house decorated
my baby got all the running
about done.paperwork
to keep our place here
shes the brains and boots
of this operation
boot on your butt
i hop on my old bike
veering about town
gets me out there
and of course Im charming
when I want too be
so I have my faves all
over town

and so it goes....

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