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Quiet Ruler
Simple man
How do you rest
Explain for me
I don't know many of you
This world makes you scarce
Is sleep a kind of adventure
I feel I've missed its meaning
Release from cares, or is
It simple understanding
That leaves you with your ease
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
weirdelf
Fri, 2017-07-07 17:57
Let me know if you meet one, Mario,
I've got the same questions.
And a question for you. Is the space before punctuation a device or an error?
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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chevyvent
Sat, 2017-07-08 23:52
Thanks Man
Where do I get my ticket to see you in Vegas man ?
Mario Vitale
weirdelf
Sun, 2017-07-09 04:30
I only do fear and loathing,
not performances, in Vegas.
Seriously, what is it with the punctuation? An affectation or do you not realise that you don't use a space before punctuation marks?
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry