I'm glad it made you chuckle, it was fun to write.

Your good opinion is always worth having.

I like the fact you read poems out loud, that's the way I write them. I Hear the poem as I read or write within my head as though listening to it spoken loud.

of course correct. Reading out loud will show up anything that reads alright on the page but trips the tongue when articulated. I therefor stand corrected.

Read it aloud three times. It did not trip me once. Maybe I am too familiar with it. Please think carefully before taking any decision about leaving, your work is generally good in my opinion but mine does not matter. there are many people on this site who have articulated a great love for your style.

It may or may not surprise you but I don't count iambs or even beats but simply go by the flow. If it sounds right it can't be far wrong. As someone who's work and positive attitude I have always admired, I have no hesitation to take up your offer.