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PINWHILE

husk of dreams
bask
viscous
flow

click of a
moment
like a seconds
stitch

swept
stillness
emotional
pin pulled

seconds flick
enumeration
smudge on
inked speed
love
whorls and
dashes
re coil less
and flavored

perfume and
adrenaline
benzos
and absorbine
a lite stutters
in the garish
stream
gushing
cold and clean
to a faucets
squeal

renegade
emotion
wrapped arms
about
devotion

the surgery
of dreams
repair
Loves vanquished
ruin

beneath a streets
eye
the flakes
fall
like ghosts
descending

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Comments

A beautiful picture painted in words, as only you can. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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