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PALOR
PALOR
there is no going back ;
there is only rushing forward
I look behind and see beyond horizons
worn by Time’s passing tears,
now filled with shadows who
shared a lifetime…..
colorless specters in refraction,
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alidzain
Fri, 2016-11-18 15:33
joe
this is simply wonderful
Alid
jane210660
Sat, 2016-11-19 06:05
Beautiful
This is beautiful Joe. Jx
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judyanne
Sat, 2016-11-19 06:38
I am in awe
I have no words Joe...
one tiny crit... do you need the word 'beyond'?
Bookmarked.
I intend to memorise this.
Love Judy
xxx
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Candlewitch
Sat, 2016-11-19 12:14
hello :)
wonderful write...leaves me quite breathless :)
*hugs, Cat
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Geremia
Tue, 2016-11-22 13:30
THANK YOU, ALL JOE
THANK YOU, ALL
JOE