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Nox noctis

lay day away
wash stars
the vineyards
and dream gates

grains plucked
of gold
morsels of fate
feasts for
forgiving famines

all breath of life
like tides
alive

easing our
days to the
mystique

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somewhere past thirteen and a half oclock..
this night has many hours...

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Yes! an excellent write simple yet driving all the thoughts that run with the night of dreams and half sleep..
Now get some rest, I hope that there is someone with you, what with the odours of perfume. otherwise you best stay in a dark room, you can use mine if you wish,lol

Foot Note:-
Ontosophy - being, or, a reason for being
Nox noctis - night

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

let the mind idle and come up with its solutions
the dreams will tell me!

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I would say pretentious crap.

You don't have to. but please it explain it to me.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

hey sport!
whats to explain?

you can see its a pretentious piece
that you would if you could call crap
(sounding sketchy again if you ask me)

so you understand it
if you can see all that

no need to explain

Workshops are great I follow them
here sometimes
but I dont have the free time for them
to commit to them whole

Thank You!

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it's not in the dictionary.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

tap on your keys and open a search engine..
Its work but I know you can achieve this
depression is a bummer!!
nothing like a little search to keep
the old mind active at our ages..

Im lucky I hung around people who went
and got their masters or I drove them to
write the test and pass the bar (lawyers bar)
NOT the booze can. It was their influence
that leads me to try on new ideas
and climb out from under my rock long ago

Some good sicilian peoples too
very religious people and I respect that
Im glad you have a dictionary
most of my money goes into my family
here and I priced a good dictionary and it
was eighty dollars! Our young charge
needs her new school clothes and items
for class so I only have my online resources
and an old computer 2006..

I got this to keep writing on my beloved Neopoet

see you in the funny papers!!!

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If you need a dictionary just ask I have a few spare here,
It would cost very little to send a book to you, much less than $80, just bear in mind that I have many spare books I even say it on my Profile, I sent our Seren a book that was printed in 1896 about Australian Marsupials for her local school, and a gift to our Moonman Richard I sent a poetry book printed in 1906, so just say and I can look one out for you, though I will draw a line at the complete Oxford dictionary of 15 volumes lol,
Yours Ian.T

PS:- I put the definitions of your words in my first comment, just shows that some people don't look at the comments much....

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Be they whom what they may

a dictionary or doctorate can not help
psychologists I have met in passing
and although degree people they make
rather ordinary folk at times

Not the salt and Butter of the way of the road
places I have moved through
subtlety is what kept one from having
a lobotomy with lead

I had a dictionary a very old one and I had
to hit the road Travel light like the Vietnam
movies where they throw all the pack
contents out that one doesnt need

I trimmed much from my life because I had
no choice and it was the way To keep
existing To trust another human
To learn something external
to quit my whining then repack
a new attitude and outlook
and do my tour of duty

I am happy that you lent your books
that you see worthy causes
I met many wealthy philanthropists
and many poor who still rob the
equally poor and downcast

there is nothing worse then a gutter
cur savaging another gutter cur

I shall adress you in the future after christmas
for more contact with this
I loved dictionarys for in my old one it had the
origin of words what language and country etc
a most fascinating study!

Reading people... I just had that natural ability
and I must say Some people just cannot be
read....

and onward with Poetry!!

Thank You Ian!

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define it.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

ontosophy ~ ontology;
the knowledge of being

cheers
p

I like the word Has a nice ring to it
I actually wake up thinking of ways to
un nerve people with my titles M

(Not)

ha ha ha

I like that You and Ian are flexible
true creative right lobe stuff this!!

A for awesome!!!!

and Thank You M ! Mr W

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Yes..a word for describing Being!
and its knowledge

as "I Know I can be a poet at Neopoet"

Thank You

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ontosophy; ontology are made up words with no meaning.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

I just write poetry
I dont make up scraps

and anyway
I can write made up words like one I heard
that maybe you are not familar with either:
"Jabberwocky" there
you can take that apart next!
and others

In the meantime Im writing
Poetry

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I didn't do enough research.
Sorry

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

the top! managing that which follows!
top as defined as the extremely endowed
with trust and value

elite is not perfection
the utopian society that all
realms imagine for their youth
or their own age

I threw in the word Elite here because
its fairly new
and popular as the populace
watchs the crumbling system
in parts of the globe become
diluted with poor health

wealth has its gifts and abilities
I was exposed to reading
from parents who purchased books
Parents who read books

if this place were an elitist place
we would have memberships
a must! we would have numbers
titles and would adhere to output

there would be a test
like corporate places to eliminate
and increase the fluidity of
motion

but we are not "creating" a product for market
therefore what adhesion to jurisdiction
or union or tithe is required

and yet..as the simple fairytale songs of long
ago continue to replicate in each new generation
the power of Poetry
can be percieved as an Elite concept

and perception is an illusion
and or delusion at times

some of the great poetry was written
with the help of delusional stimulants
illusions described

what is poetry then?
a site can be opinionated on
as each has their opinion

I have no test to ask of myself
for poetry nor any other

and I think that there are people with
laptops and not much else
existing as they do writing here
to the very elite cadre of people

we wont have to brand ourselves
Since my arrival here July 2007
Neopoet has literally hummed along
the internet is a superhighway
its public and its offered as Free
and guess what?

the poor need that and the elite love
that they can become a Neopoet Poet
and if they desire or are gifted as
one can do in our still "free" world from
America where this site is maintained
then even better

no I.Q tests..No talent tests
no background tests
just straightforward guidelines

I think its the greatest thing since
sliced bread

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mmm tasty toasted..Poetry does cause a HUNGER
because occasionally the power of language
sizzles in the imagination of a dormant cause
tickles the humour of an awaiting laugh
and frees the stormclouds of feeling that need to
torrent from the heart like the parched land
that waits to release its abundant life

starve a people and the great hunger will
thunder they will feed themselves with the word
the product of that great desire
is much needed

I remember the rhyme words of youth
being held instructed before rest before
dreams.....I never forgot it and when I went
looking to see if anyone else had forgotten
and was hungry to taste this
I found this very place

(and I dont have to worry about parking)

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