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My Elysian Song
I like when we live in a halcyon space,
where but understanding is persistence,
where loving hearts are what we all embrace,
then no evil powers are in existence.
I like when we don't pass the hatred speech,
then only caring messages prevail,
when the unreachable hearts can be reached,
and through solace seas soul_boats have to sail.
So, the peace buds burgeon, and are a bloom.
while hate in cradle dies, with its cousin, gloom.
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Inspired by Raj's I_You_We_Us
Hope I'm giving it its justice.
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Sparrow
Mon, 2018-08-20 04:20
Rula
A lovely write short and exact, very meaningful I wish more would read and understand about Love and hate.
Yours as always.
Ian xx
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Rula
Mon, 2018-08-20 16:13
Amen to that
dear Ian.
Thank you for the kind visit and the words of buttress.
Highly appreciated.
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raj
Mon, 2018-08-20 05:47
Hi friend Rula
a nice poem with a great comparison between love and hate and how to deal with it.... some great lines too
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Mon, 2018-08-20 16:15
Thanks dear raj
Always a pleasure to have your lovely visit.
I'm happy to know that you liked it.
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