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Moon Walk

Submitted by Michael Anthony on Thu, 2022-12-29 11:50

We walked together around the moon
hoping we would see our friends
everywhere passing the time.

"Will they be here, do you think?"
“I’m sure of it. They’ve had forever
and a day to jump over it.”

Style / type:

Free verse

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Last few words:

A little bit of silliness to end the year. This was inspired by a wonderful illustration by an artist going by the name moon_mxtr on Insty. This piece would probably work much better if we could include images on Neopoet - sigh... someday...

Editing stage:

Editing - polished draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content