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M I L L ..L A N E
pale slender
put your legs
across me
and own me
for the moment
i'm yours with
my wild eyes
calm
delve me and shelve
me my thoughts are
your balm
while candy blossoms
bloom like velvet soft
lips
frosted and sated with
sun
chilled with rain
you dont care about
my age
its my rage you tap
tranquil entitiy
flaring like a star
you make your wish
upon
and dream of
someplace far
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Comments
emogothgirl
Sat, 2012-05-12 21:17
esker
i simply love this. no other comment.
always,
mag
Esker
Sat, 2012-05-12 23:20
visage
a head of imageland
cbc wasteland at nights
travelling by car
cds that still work
from 2007
and books random and sketchy
bleeding through the tapestry of
modern and archive from bookstores
slick and forgotten
if this stands out in imagery
then I am
more then satisfied with this Poem
some of this is ripples on the surface
and others run far far below
thank You
Esker
Thu, 2012-05-17 00:43
equity
in the stillness the rain is heard
the tap against the dry want of the quiet
before the rush of noise steady
when the light seeps in on the
sheen and rises up like the mists
the unison of movement an exulted
moment of action
works like these are the far run from
the bland from my focal point
I only wish I had a masters
the ability to brow beat
instead I have that raw nerve of intuition
and gift
and the ghosts of all the driven mad poets
eager at their machines
with parched starvation fodder
of imagination
Ian.T
Thu, 2012-05-17 02:46
Steve
Your words as usual paint many pictures from loved books to an underlying love that seems to haunt your memories..
That you are short of a piece of paper that says Master on it there are many that say you are a master of many words and ways, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..