easier to carry and its a fine tooth too not be too raking a cut
i was obsessed with it for a time...it went from being unused mostly
to now steady traffic..not a large stretch...mostly straight up the hydro
cut..around the old reservoir mostly removed..an interesting feature
'Tea Green' u are correct in that that reference is a browning leaf!
I was thinking more of Green Tea....reversing it would make it seem
less intrusive as the commercial image of a brand would leap out
rather then the softer suffusion of its reversal....and I had already
placed the eyes on the female character as green....but the writing
is not gender specific at times...in the beginning the writing was more
in depth with visual cues...almost fairy tale but of course modernized
green tea shimmering....but no...thats not her eyes either...I am grateful
too your comments and your clever catch and sharing of insightful
meaning and word play on this...facets of writing we take for granted
at times..tweaking the system....'tile's gritty floor' we were not clean
freaks but we knew cloth and mop..bucket..etc..I see the squares...
old linoliuem...probably asbestoes...thinking like people the character
of it new...compared to its wear..the dirt becomes intimate and personal
U see I never barely write much of expression..more the mood or
atmosphere like some writers do..but I note that too in personal...
gritty is always a nod or ode to the detailing...the gritty details of
peoples lives.....her somewhat concern..(but Love) of the character
on the bed holding on....and the involvements of the light but sensed
complexiities...i write from a posessional standpoint...its in me to claim
what i write..or try to understand or struggle with the multitude of
interpersonal friendships and relationships over the years...a most
interesting and arduos task too try to deciper in short ...very short
little poems per day...Thank U very much for the work involved in this
I greatly appreciate your stopping by!!

sincerley Mr Wolf!