A very entertaining theme and sonnet. We used to read sonnets about romance and many other themes, but rarely a humourous one. I assume this is your Petrarchan sonnet.

Then the rhyme scheme is spot on.

Two lines are perfect iamb pentemeter. The other two have some metrical problem. Could it be the word EVER that messed? I think you've pronounced it as one syllable while is has two vowel sounds E-ver 

a STEP | forWARD | and TWO |or MORE |in HIND| (Perfect Iamb)

if THAT | Ever | HAppens| would I | Ever | STRIVE (I think Ever is messing your meter)

will i| AMbic |FEET of |MINE E|ver GET |to five (this line needs your attention)

is THAT | my FAULT |to FALL |so MUCH |beHIND (perfect Iamb)

This is your job to be done for tomorrow Raj.

Will parse the rest of your sonnet or part of it tonight. It is half past twelve midnight 

But I want you to know you are doing really great.

Keep it up!

a RAIN |bow DOES| aPPEAR| to HOLD |a POT| of GOLD| (perfect)
do I |KEEP CHAS |ing with |BUtter |FINgers CROSS (rethink of this line metrically)
will I|FIND a| GOLDen |GOOSEor| SENDit | for a TOSS (most of this line is trochaic where stressed syllables preceed the unstressed. And with a foot and a half more)
may LUCK | beFRIEND |me 'FORE | my FEET |GO COLD( replace "go" with "are" and your line is perfect iamb

have you forgotten to include the workshop's name from the droplist or that was intentional?

[ever] try: 'ere'. It means the same, just drops a syllable.
~ Gee

:) you are doing soo well - I'm guessing there are some very happy work shop leaders on this site who are very proud of you and others for not giving up and turning out some great sonnets.

Keep it up Raj! :)

Love Mand xxxxx

this is a great write
I have parsed it and given suggestions... (hope you don't mind me giving them)

a STEP | FOR ward | and TWO | or MORE | in HIND
(a FOR | –ward STEP )

if that | E -ver | HAPP -ens | WOULD i | E -ver | STRIVE
five and a half feet
it MAY | not E | -ver HAPP | -en BUT | i’ll STRIVE

WILL i | -AMB -ic | FEET of | MINE E | -ver GET | to FIVE
six feet - lol one could take this line as a good pun...
(i –AMB | –ic FEET | may NE | -ver GET | to FIVE)

is that | my FAULT| to FALL | so MUCH | be -HIND
(it’s NOT | my FAULT | i FALL | so MUCH | be -HIND)

a RAIN | -bow does | app -EAR | to HOLD | a POT | of GOLD
you have six feet here
a RAIN | –bow SEEMS | TO hold | a POT | of GOLD)

DO i | KEEP CHAS | -ing with | BUTT-er | FING-ers | CROSS
Again six feet
(i KEEP | on CHAS | -ing THEM | with FING |-ers CROSSED

will i | FIND a | GOLD-en | GOOSE or | SEND it | for a TOSS
six feet...
(i’ll FIND | a GOLD | -en GOOSE | or COUNT | my LOSS)

may LUCK | be-FRIEND |me 'FORE | my FEET | go COLD
(perfect iambic)

the GOSP | -el TRUTH | is TRY | -ing WHICH | is WORTH | a TRY
six feet
(the GOSP | -el TRUTH | is TRY |-- it’s WORTH | a TRY

till you | GET the | RHYM | -ing AB | -so-LUTE | -ly RIGHT
six feet
(and GET | the RHYM | -ing AB | -so-LUTE | -ly RIGHT

DO not | E-ver | GIVE up | but be | -LIEVE in | DREAM
six feet
(don’t E | -ver GIVE | up, JUST | be -LIEVE | in DREAM

till you | CRACK the | SONN-et | then LET | OUT a | CRY
SIX FEET
( you’ll CRACK | the SONN | -et, LET | a -WAY | a CRY)

the NIGHT | will PASS | to USH | -er a DAY | so BRIGHT
the NIGHT | will PASS | to BRING | a DAY | so BRIGHT

by WRIT | -ing a | SONN-et | SMOOTH-er | than a | CREAM
six feet
(by WRIT | -ing SONN | -ets SILK | i -ER | than CREAM

love judy
xxx

congratulations on finishing this attempted sonnet.
Now up to the English (Elizabethan sonnet) :)

Your third verse first stanza ... you have a 'me' in there that affects the iambic
You need 'iambi feet may never get to five', not 'me to five'

love judy
xxx

genes of a future sonneteer
i gave up