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Ho, Ho, Hold On!

Submitted by Lavender on Tue, 2023-12-05 19:42

Santa
Nearly
Overturned
While
Sleighing
Through
Ominous
Reckless, rolling, rumbling, roaring, ransacking
Mayhem!

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Contest:

12/23 Acrostic Poem Snowstorm

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

RoseBlack

Wed, 2023-12-06 05:18

This is fantastic

I absolutely love what you did with this challenge. The added humor made my early morning! I can just see the sled tumbling and turning and the chaos that ensued as a result. Great job.

~RoseBlack~

Lavender

Wed, 2023-12-06 15:10

Hello, Carrie,

Poor Santa! Thank you for reading - glad you felt the chaos!
L

author comment

Ruby Lord

Wed, 2023-12-06 08:13

Loved it, great fun, Ruby :)

Loved it, great fun, Ruby :) xx

Give and grow - let's raise our verses together. I'm happy to comment on your work and appreciate a comment on mine.

Lavender

Wed, 2023-12-06 15:11

Hello, Ruby,

I had fun writing this!
Thank you for reading!
L

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Geezer

Wed, 2023-12-06 10:20

This certainly...

got my smile machine going this morning! Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Lavender

Wed, 2023-12-06 15:12