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Happiness well, well
it takes a life time to know
to learn all about happiness
also
how to remain so
most of us run
from pillar to post
to find out what happiness means
no one searches one’s inners
to realize that’s where happiness lies,
in between mind and me
my desires and wants
my lust and sex...
all we need to do
is just to be happy
that’s what I mean to be,
do you really know
what happiness means
to ye….
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Geezer
Tue, 2013-08-13 18:03
Not so...
cryptic, this one.
A lot of people today, are so out of touch with who they are
that they don't recognize themselves when they are mirrored in another's eyes.
Obviously, you know who you are. I like this one. ~ Gee
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loved
Tue, 2013-08-13 18:29
thank you so very much
your kindness
loved
loved
mand
Wed, 2013-08-14 12:54
This is a find poem - from a
This is a find poem - from a deep thinker.
I like this stanza:
to find out what happiness means
no one searches one’s inners
to realize that’s where happiness lies,
in between mind and me ( I Like this line )
I like that you ask the question in the last stanza, it makes me and others think! and reflect.
Very well done.
Love Mand xxxx
loved
Wed, 2013-08-14 13:16
a good find...
and thanks for saying its fine ...
and u lie that one line
regards as usual you do justice to my poetry
thank u again for the very well part
and now poetically answer
the questioned part
loved
lovedly
Fri, 2021-12-24 15:30
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