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growth
Advancing the soul,
metaphysical orc, promote
original thinking,
experience all, I need sleep.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Direction):
How was my language use?
Last few words:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCgZCmCJJoCVwq2M3GH8VzLQ
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Tue, 2021-04-20 06:37
A Question?
what is an orc? perhaps if I know that, I can properly write a response. thanks.
*always, Cat
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Geezer
Tue, 2021-04-20 10:28
I do believe...
that an Orc is a sort of troll. [See any of the "Lord of The Rings"- stories/movies]. I like this much, stream of thought kinds of things intrigue me. ~ Geezer.
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2021-04-20 12:59
I feel so stupid, lol
yes I do know what an Orc is, being a fantasy nut that I am...it just didn't occur to me...my brain locked up, lol!
*always, Cat
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2021-04-20 13:03
that new light being shed,
upon your poem; I find it stimulating! more please?
*always, Cat
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Ray Whitaker
Tue, 2021-04-20 17:23
More?
I have to agree with Candlewitch... i’m hungry for more on this.
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Race_9togo
Wed, 2021-04-21 02:21
Orc:
goblin
There, that's out of the way.
Heehee.
I like this little poem, it packs a good punch.
I concur with the others, I want more.
Respectfully, Race
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Obadiah Grey
Wed, 2021-05-26 12:10
I usually switch off when the
I usually switch off when the author uses the word "soul".
The following "metaphysical orc" piqued my whattsit.
A monster of the mind? A succulent, An addiction?
Hope you slept well !
Obi.