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The Gemstone ( Imagery WS... Ex. 2)
Life struggles polished her,
a gemstone.
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wesley snow
Tue, 2017-06-27 19:16
Almost suggestive of a river stone.
"Life struggles" not man.
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Race_9togo
Tue, 2017-06-27 22:09
Hi Rula,
Such intensity packed into so few words.
Beautiful strong imagery.
Respectfully, Race
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scribbler
Tue, 2017-06-27 23:40
Hi Rula
In my mind the struggles could range from water's wear to the intense heat and pressure which first formed the gem