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Tomorrow Is Another Day

Tomorrow I'll repent of all my sins
and write away a new history
I shall quit all the caffeines
and take a good care of poor me.

I'll cut down on the junkie foods
I won't keep awake till the wee hours
I'll try out more green stuffs and fruits
to nourish with super powers

I won't break the traffic rules
or bully anyone on my way
I won't quibble or fuss with fools
tomorrow is another day.

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I believe this was coming from a repented soul. Getting excess caffeine out of your system is just the decision you have just taken. May it truly work out for you.

Too much intake of stuffs leads to undisciplined life. I honestly believe, a good state of mind would lead to self control and obedience.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

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Hello, Rula,
Very clever take on the contest theme. I really enjoy it all, but the second to the last line is the best!
Well done!
L

Iam so happy you like it. I put effort in this as I wasn't really in the mood to write.
Much appreciate yourind comment.and that line you pointed? I like it too :)

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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I love what you did with the theme to this challenge. Every day is a chance to start over and be better than the one before! Thank you for the reminder! Well done!

~RoseBlack~

Your kind words are so much appreciated.
I am writing these days only when challanged.
Hope my muse to wake up soon.
Thank you dear.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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tomorrow never comes but when it does its another today and today is buried as a gone by yesterday Now repeat after me you may have a good day

That is a really clever comment that I trasure.
I shall repeat quite often and wish you the same
Take care.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Be done with it and move on. Short and organized. Totally agree with Jackweb, good resolve at the end.

Tim

Totally agree with you.
I can't thank you enough for your generous comment and the time you offer to read my words.
Thank you so much sir.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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