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Forgo the King..

Submitted by Esker on Tue, 2014-02-11 23:07

winters shadow
like the fluid sundogs gleaming
edge a soft beauty
their careful swift wings
will walk with me

bend harsh this deliverance
in these times
for he wears no crown
that all can see
humble
with his love

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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emeka ozurumba

Sat, 2014-03-01 09:01

emeka ozurumba's picture

the leaves are bowing in the poem, but the imagery of the crown seals it

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