perhaps the pattern in short burst
makes it fall like a score

i never heard much live readings
the instantaneous switch i like
driving looking for something
at night in the rain
darkness or many lights
the steady stream
of visual input
the disttractions

im glad you like the passages
some of them

when i type i type fast
like i talk
ideas rushed...
i call it gatling gunning
rushing out words to a focal
rather then a jumble ramble
fan tango

i like ruins
things broken from once great
machinery...style..class
haunted dipped in an ache of
envy like lace

this is a love poem
most of these are
something i cannot wish to own
a dream forgotten
rotted and in repose

rammstein
marylin manson
siouxsie and the banshees
lykke li
etc etc

lately its been piano score
while composing writings
it used to be sweet walks
in the frozen urban stretchs
the faceles anonymity of cars
idling at the lights

romantic with pennies in my pockets
thumbling my nose at an establishment
i do respect

"like shadow breaths
an a bays winter grave.."

i like this line like this
emina

Thank You for your clever and creative
suggestions...