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dub

we wasted false idols
bathing in the turn basins
a summer sky flamed
voltile

crawling through weeds
the summer shone
in your rich irises
the night burned
in the bright pupil mystery

the dead apostles we scrawled
on our mounts
war horses
scratched

like us
enriched with scars
believers of the great pain

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causes unrelenting
ideals seducing a tender touch
fingers trace forbidden valleys
breast and bone
lingering

scars etched
upon the entwined
ignorant vessels
searching
for glory
undelivered

your words bathe me

thank you
for more than your words

muskoka morning birthed in arctic aurora..
For your eyes only....

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