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DRIVE THROUGH

Submitted by Esker on Wed, 2016-09-14 19:00

exertion clambers on the shocks
driving for miles escaping the blocks
stockade junkyards
slanting sun
shotgun rider
bold as the gunz

casettes full of razzle
the dazzle and flux
this heat is fading
slick as a soul
Vampyres rising
emerging from holes

exhaust tip burnt blue
jetting its trail
swirling of dust
sky so pale

outlander outbound
the incoming scream
of frustration
and anger
the hopeless scene

shattered dreams
haunted beams
nightwatch turn
all uknowns
simmer and burn

and still
even in hate
the exposed
love
the greatest
weakness

..

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Esker

Fri, 2016-09-16 18:11

Esker's picture

full metal round of passion...

what I found the greater the intellect
and creative...(Had too be beautiful...Women)
(my choice and I get what I want9ed) ) and so
did they...

the more grand the interchange Is...

even Napolean wrote a love story when
he was through ruling the world
strange.....why Josephine too me
is one of the more dynamic historical
figures I liked..

and the mythology of American and Indie
Movies.....
Lana Del Rey and her obscure wonderful
creations I love..
maybe because she likes old guys
and Im an old guy...

and then that raw brutality of survival
after all....people riding in Bentleys
and Rolls are not writing on here..
Sexton did it....but she made her money
not just sitting on the wealth of her
grandfather....mansions..estates on
the east coast....Everyone likes Plath
which I enjoy....
but Sextons...I have met along the way..

thank U!

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