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Dearest One

Submitted by Hotlicks on Sat, 2016-02-06 13:04

For you, there'll be no more crying,
For you, the sun will be shining,
And I feel that when I'm with you,
It's alright, I know it's right

To you, I'll give the World
to you, you will never be cold
'Cause you feel my warmth when I'm with you,
It's alright, I know it's right.

And the songbirds are singing,
Like they know the score,
And I love you, I love you, I love you,
Like never before.

And I wish you all the love in the World,
But most of all, I wish it from myself.

And the songbirds keep singing,
Like they know the score,
And I love you, I love you, I love you,
Like never before, like never before.
Like never before

________________________________ by Michael Bove

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Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Sat, 2016-02-06 14:22

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to neopoet. Always great to read the new members.
I like your first piece. I like the emotions that flow with your words. I thought that there are so many "ands".
Any way, I have enjoyed your first post and look forward to reading more.
A warm welcome, again.

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Hotlicks

Tue, 2016-02-09 18:02

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Thanks....and I think I agree...needs a bit of work yet for sure...just wanted to flesh out the emotions first though...thanks

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Hotlicks

Tue, 2016-02-09 18:06

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Self

“I”, at last have reached my goal
And solved the mystery of my Soul
I’ am “That” to which I prayed
“That” to which I looked for aid
I’ am “That” which I did seek
I’ am my own mountains peak

I upon creation look….
As a page from my own book
For the “I”, the “ONE” that many make
Of substance which from “ME” I take
For all is “ME”, there is not two
Creation is “MYSELF”….all through

What “I” grant unto “MYSELF”
“I” take down from my own shelf
And give to “ME”…The only one
For I’ am the “Father” …and the “Son”
And where “I” want, “I” do see…
My own wishes come forth in “ME”
For I’ am the “Knower” and the “Known”
Ruler, subject, and the throne

There is “ONE” is what I’ am
And hell, itself, is but a dam
Which “I” did put in my own stream
When in a nightmare, “I” did dream
That “I” was not the only “ONE”
And thus by “ME” was pain begun
Which ran its course till “I” awoke
And found that “I” with “ME” did joke

So now that “I” do stand awake
“I” my throne do wisely take
And rule my kingdom which is “ME”
A Master through Eternity

______________________________By Michael Bove’

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