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CONTAGIO................................................orchid dust....

Submitted by Esker on Thu, 2012-09-27 18:15

deadfall
the windmill shadow
like a sorrowed hush of dusk

Decline we the
singular mulitude
swirling round the mind hive
axis

Fouette
infirmary
round clockwork
turns

while the sky whimpers
and souls burn

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Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Sat, 2012-09-29 03:33

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This seems like a ballet of the girl in the music box when the lid is opened and she is released to dance, but then again this whispers of futility..
Then your title of the contagion that can kill so many without a question as to who.
At least you make us think and seek many words, Thank you..
Yours Ian.T

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Esker

Sat, 2012-09-29 08:09

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its interesting to see how people see..
I was thinking audience

the result wave
of that dance

all the multitude amazed at her talent
her skill
the participating wonder

then

Contagio
not just poison

but most people just see it as that

poetry is not just the first thing that comes
to mind always
I dont think anyway

Thank You

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judyanne

Sat, 2012-09-29 08:42

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i read the pollution of earth

just love
'while the sky whimpers
and souls burn'

a thought-provoking write esker - as usual lol
love judy
xxx

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shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
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Esker

Sat, 2012-09-29 11:55

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performance art I love
a friend did it part time
funding for others
it was a way of life a passion

Im just a sketchy sketcher at best
and a part time author
funded by empathy and kindess

I thank all those
for attending this poem

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