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Bodega Bay
The coffee maker is sounding
its’ morning music in late November.
Without mercy, always the hardest
working appliance when we are here.
A grey and overcast sea our frequent companion;
considered through rain-spattered windows
from hit-and-run squalls at first light.
The shorebirds, restless and racing
the foaming surf back and forth.
Familiar friends we will visit soon enough.
The receding surf along the shore
leaves a vivid mirror on the sand
providing time enough for reflection.
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Free verse
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San Francisco Bay Area - USA
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Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)
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Geezer
Sun, 2023-11-19 13:40
I had a vision...
of the crew of a fishing boat, making ready to cast off and throw the nets. Maybe not what you intended, but what I saw. Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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Michael Anthony
Wed, 2023-11-22 20:09
Not what I had in mind, but I
Not what I had in mind, but I can see how you can see this - I like it too. Thanks Geez!
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Michael Anthony
author commentTawny023
Sun, 2023-11-19 17:08
Absolutely Loved the
Absolutely Loved the beginning so relatable:) I m sure those that live by the sea also connect with the sea reflection and reference
Michael Anthony
Wed, 2023-11-22 20:10
Thank you Tawny! Our coffee
Thank you Tawny! Our coffee makers are always hard working things, regardless of location or time of year - LOL!
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Michael Anthony
author commentLavender
Sun, 2023-11-19 21:09
Bodega Bay
Hello, Michael,
I looked up images of Bodega Bay - stunning! And your poem adds a personal feeling to your surroundings. "The coffee maker is sounding its morning music in late November..." I can hear it brewing and smell the awakening fragrance! Ready to start a beautiful day.
Thank you!
L
Michael Anthony
Wed, 2023-11-22 20:13
Thanks L! BB is one of our
Thanks L! BB is one of our favorite places on the planet - so many great memories. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to share your thoughts.
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Michael Anthony
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