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BLOTTERbLUEZ

Kaliedascope craze
we crave crave crave
dance upon the surly grave
in marble statutory madness

the snow falls in on little cats feet
the hunter a lynx
draws its retraction
dips a needle to the satisfaction

grinder winter nite in the jampacked
bar
dancing barefoot
watch her swerve
on the deadmancurves
cubes inthe glass sloshin'
whiskey breath
good luck!

escape milleu Meh crowd
melting down
crystal light
touching bounds
of outer There
living the thousand yard
glare

band break
we want rock
snarling riff licks
cali switchplate over amp
roll roll roll

tangle the ego
weights too heavy
dont let you down
Life like the ride
glides in overdrive
before the pavement
ends
ride the Bend
flex the wave
inject the Love Poison
ever never
stop the grip
never slow the drip

bass vib calls us back
jammin in with the smokers
and tokers
bump and grind
crowned with
a mantle of pure white

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Comments

it is so fucking vibrant.
I won't post it anywhere without your permission.
https://soundcloud.com/neopoet/blotterbluez-by-esker

cheers,
Jess
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