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BLACK WIDOW
BLACK WIDOW
1946
A large black-rimmed hat and
black silk veil covered her face
of ruby red lips and piercing dark eyes,
and a smile that betrayed her lies
she walked across the grass
in mourning black, in a sensual dance
swaying hips in motions slow.
she was a friend to many men,
and married some who never did see
more than one rising sun.
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jane210660
Mon, 2016-05-09 03:37
I blooming well love this. Jx
I blooming well love this. Jx
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Geremia
Mon, 2016-05-09 08:15
thanks, Jx ! :)
thanks, Jx ! :)
lovedly
Mon, 2016-05-09 03:42
U GO back to 1946
were u born then in 1941
i wonder Joe
do let me know
I will guide what next to sow
YOUR NERVOUS SYSTEM WILL
grow
Geremia
Mon, 2016-05-09 08:14
oct. 19, 1942
oct. 19, 1942
lovedly
Mon, 2016-05-09 10:45
good Joe
If you can let me also
your time of birth know
then see what i say
believe it or not
its upto ye
friendly Joe
19th are born leaders
and ur a Libra also
world renowned Joe
was It
SUNDAY/ MONDAY NIGHT?