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This Almost Kiss
How does love speak
In the deep soulful stillness
Were madness melts in bliss
As tears fall on warm sin
Love comes like a whisper
Only your lips breath
Upon my lips - I am
Haunted by this almost kiss
Lover comes quietly as rain drops
In the soft warm dark
This love a moment known
In a moment gone
Like the air between your fingertips
Quietly as rosebuds
Talk to thin air
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Esker
Sun, 2016-10-30 09:05
creatively Juicy!
up here juice is steroids
further north u go the
mining towns and gyms
its as popular as the
supplements
svelte with words
maybe the rain
Like the air between
your fingertips
an excellent
line!
Thank U!
Mr Wolf!
alidzain
Sun, 2016-10-30 11:45
Hi Jasmine
Nice imagery. Well done.
Alid
Candlewitch
Sun, 2016-10-30 12:33
astounding...
this took my breath away...fantastic depth to this imagery!
always, Cat
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Esker
Tue, 2016-11-01 19:01
touching poem!
a fantastic write in troubled
times...
Mr Wolf!