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Alewife (Haiku)

The stream, full of words
Stanzas, swimming poetry
Like schools of alewife

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Structured: Eastern
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Hi, Tim,
You can't see, but I am giving you a standing ovation. This is fantastic.
L

…but I’m bashful. You’re compliments mean a great deal to me. Thank you.

Tim

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Lots of em.
Awesome Tim,
Mark

alewife of the stream
poets schooled swim in stanzas
stream fills up with words

appreciation for a great Haiku! ~ Geez.
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Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

I can see a high level of creativity here. I doff my cap for you. Erudite ink!
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"Poetry is invariably imbued with a sense of calm and serenity".

~Jackweb

unless you are going to define Haiku somewhere (wouldn't know why)
Why not take it out of the title?
Later,
Mark

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