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Ah, atrocity!!
to modify the scene
I'd crop the swine
I'd always photoshop
for a cleaner Palestine
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alidzain
Thu, 2015-10-22 13:23
Salam, Rula
Short and yet the message speaks out loudly.
Priceless blood of your men,
Stained the holy ground here
Sing the song of joy, dear
Blessed be them in glory!
Souls departing, heavens waiting.
Alid
Rula
Fri, 2015-10-23 08:48
Thank you Khalid
for the encouraging words.
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raj
Fri, 2015-10-23 13:47
Good change in Title Rula. I
Good change in Title Rula. I note you are beginning to express more and more about your love and pride about Palestine...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Fri, 2015-10-23 13:53
Thank you raj
for your visit and the comment.
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