Lovely to bring back the curses that made the day's shrouded in fear more fun to the imagination..
On the first line the word "Bore" which is to drill or something like would you be better to use "Bared"
bared :-Lacking the usual or appropriate covering or clothing; naked:
Might be an American thing though ???
This is coming around to writing poetry that defies your state and is great to read,
Go well young man and know that we are here thinking of you,
Yours Ian.T

'In unholy Gregorian'
Gregorian chants can so easily be heard/viewed/perverted as unholy rituals.

I would tend to lose the asterisk and explanation, it detracts and is unnecessary.

Hmm... those last few words either make or break the poem. I would lose them or incorporate them into the poem.