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to all those who believe
to all ladies and lads
across neo
free kisses from
meeeeee
take them or blow them away,
it’s your lips and cheeks to say ..
I have composed,
many kissy poetry
so many have read
alas not paid a penny
here I donate all my kisses to you…
catch them for free will you
all poets are friends,
even jealous ones….
I have to make amends
I‘m a friend of all those
who love me here
I send bags of kisses
blowing all over the Internet
friendly ones
take my kisses for free
but remember me
as time lapses
and you fold my kisses
then a tear will come
out of your eye
why was Loved not shy
ere saying good bye…
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Sat, 2013-05-04 10:29
Loved
I not kiss men
It's just not done
Though, I will catch a kiss
That's flying free
Especially if it is for me...
Waiting for your comments young Bard,
This one was a little too many kisses for me..
Here we go again,
Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sat, 2013-05-04 11:08
KISSING males to males and femme to femme
in a friendly way
is not gay
nor lesby
permit me to say
kisses sent by wind
only friendship display
and you are the bestest one
to no end
fun
has just begun
loved
Ian.T
Sun, 2013-05-05 03:32
Loved
We are on our own again, we post we wait we comment we wait..
Now you is blowing kisses at us.
Lonnie bless him came back with a poem the other day and felt that we had all deserted Neo.
What is going on Even Wesley has reintroduced himself ???
I spent a couple of seconds editing Cata the other day, and this one is too long for you to read, so I lost out on half the comments LOL..
There have been several times of late when I think that enough is enough, I feel we are due some new rules here on site.
It would be good to say comment on two or three before you can submit as it does on one site I post to..
Enough for today nothing is happening, Take care out there young Bard, Yours, Ian.T (Ian Thomas Howard, come join my Facebook for a while)
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sun, 2013-05-05 10:30
i had once commented
I also once commented
first read one undiscovered
and say a word
It would be good to say comment on two or three
before you can submit
loved
Geezer
Mon, 2013-05-06 20:28
Kisses...
between men are not the thing that they were in the days of Bible. Having been brought up in the days of extreme Homophobia, it was a long time before I could even hug a male friend! I do it now on occasion, but it is with circumspection for the time, place and circumstance. I accept your kisses in the spirit given, thank you. ~ Gee
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
loved
Mon, 2013-05-06 21:16
this is just a poem ...on some poets
free kisses
flown all about man and woman
pops kiss us
so do moms
that’s no exception
gal or guy
all free lips of parents apply
kiss is just a sign of pure affection
between two humans
and I haven't mentioned
lips
so I grant it
kiss, is just a kiss
a free and friendly kiss
so don't anyone it miss.
loved
Ian.T
Tue, 2013-05-07 03:07
Gee
Your long words have confused me again, I get so muddled with all these new words
circumstance:- is this how you have to stand when being circumsised
circumspection:- is this the inspection carried out to see if it is done correctly..
Yours Sparrow
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Thu, 2013-05-09 19:38
Geee
please reply this with gleeeeee
loved