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KEEPER OF THE FLAME
KEEPER OF THE FLAME
I am the setting sun
bleeding crimson-red
Into blue horizon.
I am the moon riding
In a midnight sky
shrouded yellow pale.
I am the Keeper of the Flame
with a prophet’s name *
and when I forever fall
I will have kept it written all.
*Jeremiah= Geremia
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Comments
Rula
Wed, 2012-12-19 15:55
Awe!
Simply wonderful Joe.
The title brought me in and the piece added to my awe. Wonderful!!
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Geremia
Wed, 2012-12-19 18:21
We are all keepers of the
We are all keepers of the flame.
weirdelf
Wed, 2012-12-19 17:19
I can't fault this (you know I tried)
except the asterisk to reference your name is perhaps unnecessary.
Powerful and evocative. I don't expect to leave such a legacy, a few humorous pokes here and there, perhaps my best work helping younger poets.
cheers,
Jess
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Geremia
Wed, 2012-12-19 18:33
Your presence on this earth
Your presence on this earth is known ,my friend. You will leave this place having cut through life's absurdities like burning steel, You are Promethean. Jess.
weirdelf
Wed, 2012-12-19 19:30
Promethean, i like that!
Spent most of my life upside down having my liver pecked out [grins]
But seriously, I do like to bringing the fire.
thanks,
my friend.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Ian.T
Wed, 2012-12-19 18:32
Joe
A grand write, the keepers of the flame, we are all that Joe, and as we travel on this is what we must aim for.
Many are here just so that others may learn, but in showing others that we also learn,
Take care young Joe, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Geremia
Wed, 2012-12-19 18:52
Life is a series of
Life is a series of inevitabilities.
.
.
scribbler
Wed, 2012-12-19 21:51
Hi Joe
As one gains age or infimity it's appropriate to identify with the ending of the day and coming of the night. Let's hope our days last a bit longer though lol..............stan
Geremia
Wed, 2012-12-19 22:02
From your mouth to God;s ears !
From your mouth to God;s ears,Stan