The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively uses a narrative style to recount historical events, specifically the events of Sword Beach during World War II. The use of specific details, like "British third devision," "French Commandos," "6th airborne crew," and "Mervelle a coastal town," lends a sense of authenticity and historical accuracy to the poem.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent meter and rhyme scheme. The current scheme is somewhat irregular, which can disrupt the flow of the poem and make it harder for the reader to follow. For example, the first stanza has an ABAB rhyme scheme, but the second stanza has an AABB rhyme scheme.

Additionally, the poem could use more vivid and evocative language to help the reader visualize the scene. While the poem does a good job of telling the reader what happened, it could do more to show the reader what happened. For example, instead of simply stating that "artillery pieces were taken," the poem could describe the sound of the artillery being fired, the smell of the gunpowder, or the sight of the soldiers taking the artillery.

Finally, the poem could benefit from a clearer structure. The current structure is somewhat disjointed, with the poem jumping from one event to another without much transition. A clearer structure could help guide the reader through the poem and make the narrative easier to follow.

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...this one is really enjoyable Cat. I mean the writing itself, not the theme...not to say the theme is bad, just not something one would "enjoy" if you get my intent. Your rhyme and rhythm has greatly improved in such a short time, I am impressed. I hope you continue to employ them.
Um..S1L2 decision= division? Nice work!

Thomas

Another fine read. I see you say you may have two to go. I think, when you have written them it may be a good idea to combine them into one long work. I am sure if you do combine them you will see many ways to build an epic. I look forward to more. Alex

This has been quite an undertaking. You have really done alot of homework. I think the thought to combine them was a great Idea. keep working on thia wonderful project!