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SHARD OF THE YARD
Inspector Shard
of Scotland Yard:
My god he's sharp,
by heavens, he's hard.
Solving crime before it's committed,
given the time, weather permitted.
Inspector Shard.
Always on guard.
Next time I see him
I'll get you his card.
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Tue, 2023-01-17 19:11
I'm not seeing...
a reason for the request of using care, as it is a work of sensitivity for you. But if you say so...
I liked it much, a good little ditty that set the blood racing as though there is a mystery to be solved. ~ Geezer.
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Rula
Wed, 2023-01-18 09:56
Hello
Welcome to Neopoet. Nothing like a read that puts a smile on a face. Yours did this I thought this little ditty is a great first submission.
Keep them coming
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-18 11:28
hello, nice to meet you,
welcome to Neopoet! I much enjoyed your clever piece. I have no suggestions.
*hugs, Cat
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