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Spring (Tanka)
a gypsy spirit
speaking Bohemian language
are the wild daisies
When the season is over
the phase is caged in a vase
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2016-03-24 12:50
Rula
Beautiful thanks for jumping in and bringing in the spring with us at eternal renga. Will you please go to your edit and put this in the "bring in the spring workshop". I'll have you in the participants box momentarily
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raj
Thu, 2016-03-24 14:45
I liked this Rula, especially
I liked this Rula, especially the Bohemian touch which made this unique...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Thu, 2016-03-24 15:13
Thank you raj
For the encouraging words. Highly appreciate it.
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Rula
Thu, 2016-03-24 15:15
Thank you Barbara
for adding me and the nice comment.
Much appreciate it dear.
Hope all is well with you.
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Barbara Writes
Thu, 2016-03-24 15:23
I'm better
My MS in remission
This broken tooth has me miserable
Don't know if i will ever get it fixed
Don't have the money
Do thus I suffer until it move on
For another day
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lovedly
Thu, 2016-03-24 13:12
wonderful
coming Rula from you
kindly read mine too
not much a do to
not only all about spring to say
but Rula twill be nice coming my way
Rula
Thu, 2016-03-24 15:16
hello loved
And many thanks for the time and the nice words
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alidzain
Thu, 2016-03-24 18:29
Salam, Rula
Yes! I've been waiting for you to join the workshop, sis. Can't remember the last time you have written a tanka here.
Alid
Rula
Tue, 2016-03-29 15:14
Thank you
Khalid. I think this is my first or second one.
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Esker
Thu, 2016-03-24 20:36
this is cool~!
excellent work!
dazzling sweet!
thank U Rula!
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2016-03-24 20:42
Hi
Have you written haiku or senyru lately
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Rula
Tue, 2016-03-29 15:13
hello Barbara
are we supposed to write haiku and senyru or only tanka
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Barbara Writes
Tue, 2016-03-29 16:54
Rula
Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.
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Barbara Writes
Tue, 2016-03-29 16:54
Rula
Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.
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Rula
Tue, 2016-03-29 15:16
thank you
Steve. So kind of you to give this one a visit.
Appreciate it
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Barbara Writes
Tue, 2016-03-29 16:55
Glad to see you Steve
Welcome to eternal renga
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