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LA PETITE MORT [ English]
LA PETITE MORT
[English]
I feel my life force begin to weaken
a flickering flame on a candle
and my spirit resists a surrender
to an undetermined disconnect
not of its knowing.
my mind is clear to what
my heart will not see...
and my soul sorrows
for the pity of it all.
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Comments
alidzain
Mon, 2015-12-21 10:37
Joe
I feel the struggle.
Alid
Geremia
Mon, 2015-12-21 10:46
Yes, Alid, every day. Thanks
Yes, Alid, every day. Thanks, my friend.
joe
alidzain
Mon, 2015-12-21 12:45
Joe
I know pain
it can drive you insane.
Devoid of comfort,
forced to face the hurt.
You wait for it to end,
its a matter of when
but it stretched forever
and ever and ever..
Alid
Geremia
Mon, 2015-12-21 13:13
...through time eternal,,,
...through time eternal,,,
God have mercy on us all
Esker
Thu, 2015-12-24 07:35
horrible and accurate
that U go through this...and your work is vivid of the descripts of what it is
doing....our mortality and humanity..great poetry!!
thank U
Geremia
Thu, 2015-12-24 08:52
Thanks, Steven. I am an
Thanks, Steven. I am an oxymoron/
joe