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el Sicko
a medical team in cahoots
with systems tugging at the routes
an arm flailing where
he had just kicked a chair
now they're ready to unlace his boots
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Comments
Ian.T
Thu, 2014-11-13 04:40
Simon
Maybe there is a typo in this line:-
with systems tugging at the "routes"
Need to put some "roots" down there someplace lol,
Unless you are going down route 42,
as that is the road to everywhere
Good write though
Yours Ian.T
PS:-
42
← 41 42 43 →
← 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 →
List of numbers — Integers
← 0 10 20 30 40 50 60 70 80 90 →
Cardinal
forty-two
Ordinal
42nd
(forty-second)
Factorization
2 × 3 × 7
Divisors
1, 2, 3, 6, 7, 14, 21, 42
Roman numeral
XLII
Unicode symbol(s)
Greek prefix
μβ
La La
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Simon Smythe
Thu, 2014-11-13 14:59
It's on porpise
I want to see if I get away with it.
42 . . . could this be a Douglas Addams reference? I'm on board! (the Vogon constructor ship)
I call 42 3 for short
Keep smiling . . . it worries the enemy
your pal Si
Simon Smythe
Thu, 2014-11-13 15:11
or . . .
it's on purpose . . . I believe in it's meaning
the route of the problem
the route of all evil
route 66
root canals not withstanding - both meanings aimed for
Lenny of Cohen
Fri, 2014-11-14 21:15
Short and sweet
but very good indeed!
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Simon Smythe
Fri, 2014-11-14 22:15
I agree . . .
It's space you have to watch
Lenny of Cohen
Sat, 2014-11-15 06:58
as
you should!!!
_________________________________________
"Death" is nonsense: what is there to die?
"Life"? How could " life" "die"? That is a contradiction
in terms. Can "light" become "darkness"?
"Light" can only cease to be apparent
Wei Wu Wei