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Wild train
A wild Mc screaming shit
God's remix people equipped
I got you feces
rappers puzzled pieces kicked
in love with the sweet eclipse
When I rap I gotta hold back
Lest the crowd think it's a demon trick
Lord who am I to exist
My computer chip overloaded thought in my brain explains why I shoot for shots empty clip and the rudest God
fort Knox
Sunny wit
man this judas cop poor Bart
Tummy fit damn I'm lit thru the heart
pop tart
sweet as the ambulance coming
when your hearts thudding
almost dead
hope how do I cope with this blessing
some ancient message
something chasing me
tiger my heads higher taste fire
my God gave me a chance
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Tue, 2023-11-07 13:40
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