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The Unsung Heroes
The scorching sun can't be compared to the pains he succumbed to. So overpowered with virtuous courage and so he can beat every uncertainty.
Strong boldly spelt over a beautifully smiled face with so many untold wounds piping rough edges of memories in his brain.
Devastated he could have been but his might in courage strongly held him up.
Strong and courageous merely words to many but him a ride he has bestowed upon himself. Voyage that can't be stolen from him.
They're known for holding on to tears but no one imagines how hot the unshed tears are and how slowly and faster they're approaching an end they themselves never wished for.
Men, the unsung heroes!
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Thu, 2024-02-08 23:10
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